Gender Equality is a Myth By Sana Mehmood

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Post by raja.mehmood » Wed May 08, 2019 8:34 pm

Sana Javaid wrote:
Wed May 08, 2019 6:04 pm
a very random start which make me confused because i have no idea about it. author' style make me relaize that it is not written for me but a reply to his any academic debate. sana i appreciate you if you are preparing for css but you have to be more focused.
I have started the opening sentence on the topic. I claimed that gender equality is not possible, because of those reasons which i have quoted, however, I have defined that what UN and Pakistan constitution stated about gender equality.
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Post by raja.mehmood » Sun May 12, 2019 4:21 pm

Nayab Rizwan wrote:
Wed May 08, 2019 1:16 pm
Dear Author.. The claim is not established and proper evidence is not described in this paper.
dear nayab I have tried my best level to putdown evidence. in Pakistan, the women's quotes are less in politics and many other fields like civil services.
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Post by kanwal shahzadi » Sun May 19, 2019 10:15 pm

The material you wrote in outline is not discussed in the introduction nor in the conclusion...introductory paragraph should illustrate the meaning and purpose of your writing and i think that is missing..
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