DRUG SUBSTANCE BECAME THREAT FOR SOCIETY

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Maria Amin
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Re: DRUG SUBSTANCE BECAME THREAT FOR SOCIETY

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Post by Maria Amin » Wed May 08, 2019 12:13 pm

The introductory paragraph is not appealing. You should have started the introductory paragraph by generating discussion on it. After generating discussion the purpose of the study should be mentioned and its importance should also been given by the writer.
Limitations of the study has not been set by the writer.
Sources are mentioned from which the literature have been read.
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Post by RIDA Arshad » Wed May 08, 2019 12:34 pm

The title of the study doesn't seems catchy to me, little changes in it can make it more interesting for readers .Moreover the author didn't contextualized the study on any particular society i-e Author can highlight the usage of drugs in Pakistan and how it is effecting people's life.
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Post by kanwal shahzadi » Sun May 19, 2019 10:50 pm

Good effort by the author...the author should provide the recent data (authorized) on drug addictors for making it more appealing to the readers...writer should use the appropriate words for the drugs used worldwide so that any reader can easily understand the meaning of that word... overall the structure of the essay was good.
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